Fight

About a relationship ending and the feeling of emptiness

Ive lost my fight
my will to live
after all
you have taken all i have
I had to give

I'm just a shell
Nothing more

My spirit
My heart
my sole

Lost and gone
Forever it seems
Never ending
Like a horrific dream

Took it
Messed with it
Broke it
Disposed of it

Shattered and Lost
Myself just a ghost

Author's Note

Just say what you think.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

It feels like that sometimes; I hope it passes quickly. Good job.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Such and emotional piece,nicely written.keep writing

[David Scott]

The poem is the antonym of the title... Interesting way to lead in.

[Ellejune]

Thanks
Is this a good or bad thing?

[David Scott]

What do you think? I have no opinion. Just an observation of intrest.