Just About Perfect

If the nights were to end,
Would you still be here by my side?
Stroking my hair as I
Lay my head on your pillow.

Let me catch my dreams
As your fingers slowly ran through my hair.
I couldn't help but fall in love with you.
As we shut our eyes
And soon enough, drifted off to sleep.

(Chorus)
Don't let time hold us back
From being who we are.
Together. together
We can't deny
We're just about perfect.

As we lay here,
Don't settle for half.
I won't let go
If you don't.
As long as we both hold on
We'll have each other.

(Chorus)

I couldn't imagine you closer.
As I envision the stars above.
You were mine
And I was yours.
With our eyes still shut,
We never dared to let go.

(Chorus x2)

Reviews

[Cassie]

This is a very nice song, nicely written, I love the words and can already begin to imagine the rhythm. Good job

[Astro]

I just read this one and 'It's only a love song' and I find it hard to imagine the words being sung, so it's a little tricky to review either. The sentiments are there and touching softly like 'fingers through hair' at romantic hours. In your chorus, I felt like the word 'Together' stood out. What I mean to say, is that in the singing of your song in my head 'Together' sounded like it was something you wanted stressed. So personally, I would double it so that you say it after "We're just about perfect...Together" but like I said earlier, it's hard to imagine to flow and accents 'you' would sing.