Be With Me

Please don't worry
When I shed tears
At night.

Don't get upset
If I want to be away
From you some days.

Don't criticize me
If I
Speak to you the truth.

All I ask
Is that
You:

Hold me when I
Need your warmth.

Kiss me
When I need it most.

Don't call me weak
If I become vulnerable to you.

Just be there.
Accept me.

Be with me.

Reviews

[Zero_Edge88]

"As it is with your innocent smile, All that I know is right here with me. When I am with you, I feel the need to say, 'What is there to need when all is here at shoulder's length.'

Your eyes tell me, 'Stay.' Your lips whisper inaudibly, 'Closer'. Your heartbeat reverberated, 'Music to my ear.' Your soul definitely said, 'Found you.'

For what is this beauty in front of me. I am but not the muse in your books, rather I am your secret lover. Hidden from plain sight the shadows are cast but when they are gone I reveal myself only to you. As if we were meant to be concealed by the stars at night. They are boldly in love with each other. An unspoken truth definitely and beauty oft missed.

This is a love incomparably difficult but beautiful of each other. After all, these are our hearts, our soul and our mind in unison of each other.

So to stay, closer and listen to your music which is your heart and hearing you tell me you have found me is the only music I only want to dance to in this dance floor with you."

:) remarkable and truly magical moment piece. That is my review of it :)

[Tim Piotrowicz]

A tough standard but I'll try to be like this to those close to me.
OH! And also a good poem ;)

[Aethereal]

You expressed yourself very well here with an economy of words in the form of a wish list. Details are left out, but a poem is neither a novel, nor an essay. We may easily guess at the details. Each item in this list could be the topic of another poem.

[Traci]

A very well penned piece, expressing much honesty. I think this is a piece many of us can relate to. Time is the most precious gift we can give someone, to be wanted and accepted for who we are. Great message.