Go or Stay?

I feel it's not right
How everyday I have to fight.
Sleep won't take me.
Happiness surely won't make me.

You wished me to be okay
But my heart knew I couldn't stay.
Tonight, could you be alive with me?
For a tomorrow, we could see.

Feeling low
And never know.
What to say.
Go or stay?

Reviews

[MassThinker]

It's never easy and you put imbedded the feelings within the words. I understood your messege. I like this poem.

[Rere020616]

I like the words you used, simple but direct... I really love this poem, because I felt same way too.. I really want her to stay, still she have to go for work..hehehehe...keep it up..nice poems I've read...your full of feelings...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The contemplative voice within the lines of this one...and you leave us as a reader with the final stanza:

Feeling low
And never know.
What to say.
Go or stay?

only you know the answer...yet others can have the same issue on a different spectrum...

[FlatLineBeauty]

I've felt that way a lot. over and over so many times. I'm here for you bestie