Band-Aid

Band-Aid

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Give me hope,
To see a new day.
Give me the eyes,
To see a new way.
Perhaps now,
I can take off the band-aid.

© 2013 I Am Svetlana


Author's Note

I Am Svetlana
A very short poem I just thought of and not sure whether to keep it short or add onto it :/

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Short but fully expressed. Enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The poem needs band aid. Just kidding :) It's short and makes sense. Good one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


We all have things we need band-aids for. So too, we could all use a little hope.

Short and to the point. I like it.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the current length. It expresses exactly what it needs to, without muddling the concept or repeating itself. I can see the appeal in healing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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