We Could Be

These words just
Spill out of me.
Thinking of you
Sets my mind free.
You are here.
I want nothing else to see.
I'll be the king
And you'd be my queen.
Together, living in ecstasy.
Forever, we could be.

Author's Note

Written for and dedicated to Radrach23 <3

Reviews

[Draven]

Expresses so perfectly what I feel for someone. Wow, this is really cool. Nice work.

[Joiedevivre]

sweet and succulent, like biting into a juicy strawberry!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A sweet short write and dedication.

[Shane William]

This is very sweet and has such great feeling. It's short and blunt and you either take it in or go. I find that I write like that as well at times.

[Cassie]

This is such a lovely dedication, I enjoyed reading

[Justine]

I like what you did here with a short rhyming poem that says so much. It has a lightness to it that really makes for a refreshing read. Enjoyed it :) Jussy

[poetdoug]

You have a great gift for word painting. Well done my friend

[Silent_Wolf]

This is a pretty good poem. I like it!

[icelandicblue]

Your words a like an abridged fairy tale. They remind me of Terribithia.

[Simone]

aww this was beautiful. i absolutely love this.