One Last Kiss

One last kiss.
That is all I'll miss.
Without you,
My life would be bliss.
Tearing down the street
With our hands locked together.
It is obvious that we
Surely weren't meant to see forever.

Author's Note

Thought about this in class today :)

Reviews

[BriBri]

Deep. This poem shows how complicated life is compared to simple actions. It reminds me of a poem I wrote, Influenced Thoughts. Keep t it up

[Lilly]

"It is obvious that we
Surely weren't meant to see forever."

I love those last lines - really powerful.
Nice poem

[Catherine Frain]

This poem sounds so sad, as if one last his/her love as they walk away or left them behind. "Without you,/My life would be bliss" is a great example of this.