"This Girl, That Boy" Love

I was the girl
With no heart.
Waking up to nothing, but gloom
And dreary, misty days.
Not one to be glorified.
I have baggy eyes, no motivation.
This was me.

He was the boy
With no soul.
He didn't listen to people's rules,
Didn't much care.
Running the streets,
Searching for lost gold.
That was him.

I was the girl
Who ran into that boy one day.
I asked what he was looking for.
He smirked and said:
"I just found it."
I curiously asked him what.
"My forgotten gold." he replied.

Together, we were each others.
Him being my heart
And I being his soul.
That was our love.

Reviews

[love, lorey]

This is so sweet! I love poems that tell a story, very good work! :)

[Cassie]

Forgotten gold, I love that idea. Good one girl

[Howlsong]

:'D that was beautiful!!!!

[Raymond Federle]

Wonderfully written. A story and a poem. Excellent!

[SOUL LESS]

Nice. This is nice. The conclusion, brings it all in. It's not the greatest literary feat, but it has a very nice idea behind it.

Keep it Up :)

[Winter Renee Vineyard]

Simple but beautiful! Good write!

[BriBri]

I approve of this poem simple and telling.

[Laura Harrison]

This is such a wonderful poem telling the story of love at first sight. I just love a romantic poem! :)

[Kimberley Reid]

So beautifully put, tells a real story. Can't wait to read more of your work!