Pulsing

I can feel it.
Anger, excitement, joy, even sorrow.

          Pulsing.
                    Pulsing.
                              Through my malnourished veins.
So empty, they were.
Until I nursed them back to health.
                    With the inner
                            Emotions
                                   Within
   Me.

Reviews

[Stoop Kid]

I am in love with the formatting you did for this poem; it puts so much emphasis on the description of each emotion, each action. I especially adore the acceptance of all emotions, in-between and on either end, of the spectrum. I've been told by someone that true sanity is acknowledging and embracing of each emotion as they are felt. Seeing this poem really resonates that idea within me. Amazing work, Svetlana.

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow, thank you for this wonderful review! And I am glad to be so in touch with every emotion of mine, it is something that really not many people know about me. It is something I normally keep to myself and help it empower my creativity and understanding. And for the format of this, I figured it worked better this way than any normal format a poem would be in. That way, people can see the meaning in a new way, new depth.

[Stoop Kid]

I'm more than happy to be able to review your work, really, it's such a pleasure reading your poems! :) I'm the same exact way with my feelings; I address, acknowledge and embrace all of them as they are, along with their origins. I am pretty open with my feelings for the most part, but to a point; sometimes it seems like telling too much can undermine what I'm really feeling when I'm talking about something, and I lose touch with my muse sometimes when I do say too much before just penning it down, haha.

And the format works *perfectly* for what you were aiming for it to do! I don't see it often, so it's definitely refreshing!

[I Am Svetlana]

Well, I am glad I am able to let you read something in a new format. And often, I don't write in formats like this, but in this, I feel it helps express and understand each set of emotions. How they are all somewhat related, though often the are completely different from each other on many levels. Also, I feel I talk too much sometimes and often my mind gets overwhelmed and just goes blsnk when I have so much more to say. Which is why writing is a perfect therapy for me: it helps me say what I have to say in any sort of length and not have to worry about putting too many details in or explaining every emotion a certain way.

[Clemmy]

AHMAYZING! This indeed is amazing

[radio raven]

Interesting layout to this piece.