Please, Oh Darling...

Please, oh darling...
Let me love you!
It is all I desire.
Dream about.
Write about.
Even think about.

Please, oh darling...
You are the one I truly deserve.
I can feel the truth run through my deepest nerves.
New dreams.
New inspiration.
New life.

Please, oh darling...
You must be 'the one'.
I've stumbled across your path
And my painful search is over.

Now please, oh darling...
Make me yours!

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Very moving piece on real love, the kind you feel in your bones, pulses through your veins and gives you the breath in your lungs. When we find that person we just know in our very core that they are the one right?! Wonderful write, I felt every word, well done!

[An owl on the moon]

What a sweet, sensual longing! Your words inspire the heart to shine and live so wondrously in the moment... Beautiful!

[Sami Khalil]

The pleading and pleasing go long ways I guess. A wonderful write...:)...................