The Invisible Abyss

Sometimes, I don't want to be awake.
I let darkness consume me
As I fall through the invisible abyss.
Clawing, fighting,
But there is no way back out.

Is there something I missed?
I just remember you never bothered
To give me a departing kiss.

I stay stuck in this darkened cage
As I desperately hope that you'll find your way.
I can only hope
You'll pull me back into reality.

Reviews

[Derek Smith]

I like this. Seems a lot like someone putting someone we before them self

[Braden Aric]

I really liked this. Great job.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Is that a typo in the title...Bravo.........................