If I Were a Mystery

If I were a mystery,

I could stay lost forever.

A cold case.

Unsolved.

If I were a mystery,

I wouldn't need an ending.

I'd be a constant page-turner.

Keep the people guessing.

If I were a mystery,

No one would have to worry.

I would be out of everyone's life.

Gone.

A cold case.

Unsolved.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

If I were to be a Cold - Case I would be subject to resolution based on the legality of inclusion by the forces that police the solutions. Instead my confidence thrives as if it wanted to reign, pretending supremacy even if it is just temporary. It is within then I speak no word unheard -- I am motivated and just then-- I'm all there is to be. Quasi omnipotent at risk of complete within my own diversity.

Spontaneous writing is a funny thing -- Svetlana but I did not see what you saw not even for one second. That's were words and meaning actually may differ a little. I read what you wrote and interpreted differently.

I hope you don't mind.

Thank You.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Wow this is so cool. But I think that we are all mysteries. Not even I can solve my mystery. This reflects an element of majesty somehow. I can't really tell why it gives me that vybe. But it was really well written and I really enjoyed this. Make sure to keep up the good work.