Some Days

Some days,
I get this feeling
That you don't love me.
My heart turns to chill
And it becomes hard
To breathe.
What is love
When you're left in the dark?

Some days,
I hurt myself
Because I begin to
Miss you so bad.
What is love
When you must hurt yourself
Just to get by?

Some days,
I feel so lost.
Stranded.
Your touch is
The only thing I know.
What is love
When you feel
So far gone?

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Your writing is so good, so powerful. I must say this hurts me knowing you hurt
my prayers are with you friend, thanks for sharing.

[ms. barrie]

heart wrenching write...true love does not hurt you
it took me a long time to realise that and force
myself to face it.
I always enjoy your simplistic rhyming scheme
and dictation...your words speaks volumes.
wishing you the best (:

[Alisa Js]

Sad one here. True love doesn't make you wonder, tho..

Just a thought for what it's worth.

Alisa💫

[Gee]

Sweet,love is just yearning,longing unless you're loved back,perhaps!