Psycho

That girl.
So pretty in pink.
A psycho.

No apology in her.
Came from a lonesome family.
If you wish to speak to her,
Save your breath.
Unless you want a
Personal panic dream.
She'll steal your life,
Along with your pills.
She says lovesick words,
Yet has those hateful intentions.

That girl.
So pretty in pink.
A psycho
Who needs to be
Re-programmed.

Reviews

[Astrid]

I love how your poems are so on point and lovely. They perfectly and seamlessly depict whatever you try to convey. You are a lovely poet :)

[KirstMind]

While reading this I couldn't help but think of Kurt Cobain and Nirvana's lyrics... I think its has to do with the depth of this piece... Really captivating, great job :)

[ms. barrie]

...stopped by...the title caught my eye..
ow...this delivers a scratch! I love how
in so few words, you're able to convey the disdain
of having to dealt with such a person. I love the
"pretty in pink" reference...the movie.
the last stanza is my favorite...scathing humor!
thanks for sharing :) ~ xox. :)

[Nila M.]

"unless you want a personal panic dream"... I'm so into that line.

[Nila M.]

Your words are like combo punches. I love how directly you approach the subject. Kind of tongue in cheek humorous in some ways and really a little scary at the same time. It's just 'real' feeling, raw but kind of mysterious.