Not All of Me

If you knew the truth,
I wouldn't exactly
make you proud of me.

I often laughed
like a lunatic
as I saw glass under rain.

I had better moments
when seeing stones magnified
all the way to Heaven.

I wasn't exactly a lady.
"Watch your back, Barbie doll."
It didn't happen like that.

Under perfect skies,
I held a foul temper
along with disappointing returns.

Believe me,
not all of me
makes you glow

all over.

Reviews

[Johanna]

Very great piece scetlana.. took you on a journey of someones life and thoughts.. plus I thought it was new and origional with wonderful depth. Great work!

[AaronFreitas]

Life sometimes is full of disappointing returns.... what is important is to keep plugging along and figure out how to change that into good fortunes. Good work Svetlana!