Speak!

I want my words
to make sense,
but they just
won't click.
It's all written.
Just seems they
turn out wrong.
Should I
let the words
fix themselves?
Or simply, how
do I make them
speak?

Author's Note

Yelling at my words...

Reviews

[Miguel Chicas]

The moments when words don't work out the way you want it to work, damn those days.

[Relic]

I know the feeling. Writing is never finished, its abandoned. Sometimes the words speak, other times they are as quiet as a mouse as far as meaning and punch. Keep looking. :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
I think as writers we all have felt this frustration one time
or another:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!