"You're Just Heartsick"

Through the woods
to the lake,
too many memories
are drowning me.

In the morning,
I hear only his voice.
Lies once discovered,
straight from the heart.

I still can't
let it go.
His actual words...
Did he really love me?

Then I remember!
My last dream,
he told me:
"Don't be a fool,

You're just heartsick."

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

You nailed the feeling in this poem. I connected right from the start. I liked it a lot.

[Aphy!]

Absolutely loved it...I like all your pieces really. Your talent and word play is amazing. I love reading all your work (And sometimes I wish I could write like this) but anywho. Well done hey and thank you for sharing yet another piece!
Aphy