Once Again...

Close your eyes.
Our lips can touch
underneath the sky.

Let's fall in love
once again...
just like before.

Bring me back
to your smile,
that special smile.

Give me your heart,
then I'll be complete.

Let's fall in love
once again...

Reviews

[Mirko Galuši..]

So much said, with little words. Love. It is one of the biggest mysteries of all human feelings. I didn't read the poem, I felt it. It makes me sad. but not negatively sad. It made me think of my old love. One still haunting me and coming back into my thoughts and dreams. You made me miss her. Poetry is meant to do just that...

[LapseOfMind]

Very nice. I really enjoyed your last two lines, powerful. Wonderful poetry, thank you for writing

[anonymousprankt]

The Lovely concept;
The Holy intentions;
Solely Dedicated;
The Beautiful Poem.....

[An owl on the moon]

I love the beautiful longing in your words, the desire to return again to that place of love and hope. Love doesn't end, it is that we too often leave its shores to try and find life somewhere else.

[Dhaye]

In some instances, love is lovelier and sweeter the second time around. When you love someone, you will take chances to be happy again.

Short but powerful lines.