Paradise...

Leading into the gray night,
colors morphed into each other.

Despite the dead light,
we trudged upon broken glass.

Our eyes were dead,
as our hearts froze into solid ice.

I'll-prepared on escape.
Holding hands, no words spoken.

Beginning to break loose,
all to reach the shredded flags.

Staring with frightened eyes,
it could be paradise...

Reviews

[Sanzabar]

The beginning of a journey for sure, hold on tight! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your words created a picture in my mind it could be paradise.. lol

[Dhaye]

Somewhat talks like "We Found Love in a hopeless place"...
Even in a most uncomfortable place or situation, love can make us see a paradise.
Great piece!

[Curtis.Lenker]

Great imagery here. I could see it all in my head. The message is clear. Good job here.