Vanishing Time

In a dreary state
as clouds go by,
only a book for a companion.
Eyeing a mural of the world
when there is nothing left of us.
I forgot all about the marvels.
Vanishing time.
Too many choices.

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

This one is really amazing, and all I can say is few words are even more powerful, and that is what you did in this poem, and I really liked it!

[dan]

Svetlana, The brevity and starkness of this piece set it within a tightly formed framework, imbuing each line with a much more important feel to them. You say so much in so few words, a talent to be treasured. I like your style and am happily accepting your friend request. I DO ask that you please send read requests; it's the only way I can stay organized and on point with my reviews.
A simply wonderful write! take care...dan