Waiting

I watch the sea
kiss the sand
as I lay on the beach.
Feeling the sun rays
caress my skin.
"We're free."
I whisper to the wind,
dreaming of you.
Wishing you were here.
Lately, they sky
is where you reside.
I speak to it everyday,
waiting for a reply.
So far, God has kept me
waiting.

Reviews

[Tamika]

Beautiful. Emotional. Inspired by some form of grief I am gathering. This is very well written, and I love the metaphors you've used. Well done.

[TheLostMind]

We all will have to wait until it is Time to get it. Things will happen when they are supposed to happen. All we can do is wait. A good write. :)