Time Apart

Time apart
has planted
a poison within me.

I am racing around
to find my
vanished halo.

The red colors
bleed through
my fresh clean sleeves.

I hope
it reminds you
to come back to me.

Reviews

[Tamika]

I like this. Very raw emotions, and unfortunately so relatable. I am really fond of this though, well done.

[TheLostMind]

This one is both powerful and touching. Again, the emotions are quite palpable. Great job.