Into Silence

The feeling of waiting
is so unsettling,
but she breaks it
with her words.
I can't erase it...
I should have
left it unknown.
I owe myself the explanation,
but it's not like
I can say anything.
Pulling myself further
into the background,
I am disappearing again...
this time into silence.

Reviews

[Mifa]

You write like your thoughts dip themselves in ink and fall down your head onto the pad. There's this uninhibited vibe that follows every line you pen down and I must tell you, it is indeed something.

Once again, this feels very personal. And I like how you are able to capture a single moment with simple words.

It's a great poem. Keep writing.