Whispers

Whispers

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

My eyes were
half-closed,
half-opened,
when you whispered
"I love you"
into my ear.

It'll always be
the most peaceful thing
I ever did hear.

© 2016 I Am Svetlana


Author's Note

I Am Svetlana
The most precious, peaceful words I will ever hear...

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Great...
You expressed the meaning of these three words. Indeed We cannot expressed peace that we feel when we hear these words from someone. The other thing that I much like in this writing is your expression of ideas in so simple words. Thanks for sharing. :-)

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Szhzia


Posted 9 Years Ago


Those sweet words "I love you"
can make all the difference don't they?
Well written and expressed:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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