Whispers

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

My eyes were
half-closed,
half-opened,
when you whispered
"I love you"
into my ear.

It'll always be
the most peaceful thing
I ever did hear.

© 2016 I Am Svetlana

Author's Note

The most precious, peaceful words I will ever hear...

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SZHZIA

Great...
You expressed the meaning of these three words. Indeed We cannot expressed peace that we feel when we hear these words from someone. The other thing that I much like in this writing is your expression of ideas in so simple words. Thanks for sharing. :-)

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Szhzia

Posted 9 Years Ago

Jamestown

Those sweet words "I love you"
can make all the difference don't they?
Well written and expressed:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI

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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..