Take Me to Bed

Take me to bed
and forcefully
tear my soul open.
Become the
exhilarating feeling
in my veins.
Happiness is too rare,
but you're not like the others.
Find the terrible
traits in me and
have your body
remind me of what
a rare thing we bloomed.
Make me understand
why you're the one
who makes
my world beautiful.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful words for the need of heart and body. We need to feel wanted and needed. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to perfect ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ardra]

loved these lines

Make me understand
why you're the one
who makes
my world beautiful.

good one :)