Our Own World

That feeling
when your lips touched me,
I felt our passion renewing.
It keeps slithering...
connection through touch
and emotions rocked my core.
It won't be long now,
until they see
the most beautiful part--
a love no longer
shattered in the street.
A touch was all it took
and we are our own world.

Reviews

[Dhaye]

I love this. True love will find a world of its own.
Short but splendid.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"We are our own world," amazing line!
The whole poem has such a great calm, passionate, truthful voice. This was a huge delight to read!