Call Me (One Last Time)

Call me one last time.
I need to hear your voice
in order to solve the equations
deep within my mind.

Call me one last time.
Help me see through tears,
so I can turn
my demons into art.

Call me one last time
out of my hearts desire.
I just want
someone to love me.

Call me one last time.
I need a break from
the unknown
and undiscovered.

Call me one last time.
I see lights of forgotten dreams.
This exhaustion has been
constantly tearing away at me.

Call me one last time
before it's too late.
Blank pages await for me
between here & forever.

Reviews

[BThomvanWart]

This is definitely something I connect to. It's almost like reading someone's thoughts that have resounded in my head multiple times in the past, through the years. It's a very somber, but enlightening piece. Nice work!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is so heart-touching! I loved the repitition in every stanza..though it's in a sad tone yet it gives nice flow to your composition.. Good work!