The Moment

Oh, from the moment
you kissed me...
I knew you were one
who could make me
forget all the pain.
It is the only
truth that remains.

Oh, from the moment
you kissed me...
I never dared to
dream of anyone else
in colorful bursts.
Now able to flourish,
to survive.

Oh, from the moment
you kissed me...
we knew our ending.
Two hearts connected
upon notice of my
silent suffering.
Demons left behind.

Oh, from the moment
you kissed me...
I became an
angel of Earth,
ready to spread my wings
and make myself
a proper home.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful and lifting! How a simple kiss, a loving heart, can transform our world into a heaven on earth. May you always feel that sense of flying. :)

[Bala Gorthi]

The state of feelings in full bloom is clearly reflected in this write. This highlights how a source of love and an act of love can bring colour, life and hope into the beings.
The last section gives wings to that feeling..
I loved the way you showed the change in the first stanza you drive out the pain, in second brought out the colour and life, in the third you brought the end to sufferings and finally you gave wings to take off...
A beautifully crafted write celebrating a moment! Thanks for sharing this