Home Again

Face down in the dirt,
trying to stop the hurt.
I refuse to speak.
I refuse to feel.

My Lover needs to see
that I a, simply
waiting to die,
wondering why.

I want to stay here
in this moment,
cursing the miles
in between.

If you want,
feel free to
leave a message
at the tone.

There are shadows
who would be glad
to escort me
home again.

Reviews

[Myenigma]

the imagery is good. shadows that will take you home, facing the dirt. The rhyme structure is random but it has a nice flow to it. My only opinion is to change the last line to "back home" so it could rhyme with 'tone' in fourth stanza and continues the flow.