Nothing, Yet Alive

Pain in my foot.

Pain in my heart.

It isn't here.

I don't exist.

The world is nothing

And yet it's still turning.

Reviews

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I think you've got something there.
Profound.

[chaffy]

nothing, yet alive... a lot of think about.. i thought that your opinion s expressed well.. although, the topic you choose is with meaning and really deep.. good write.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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One stanza an says what you need it too. Here is an interesting middle and ...
I'll put out there the staging is eclectic, in the midst of apathy. An really I don't mean that in a negative way at all. As all expression is a relevant quality. Apathy is an Emotive response. Ah bla bla bla hey rhetoric. Yet wait ah sec, cause here is the kicker, and what... I appreciate in the simplicity.
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You present here to me.
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As in Hiko... the oriental population, respond. From the other side of the emotive brain. Then our fucked up culture. To us, hey its raining. An the brain says, get an umbrella. They say: listen, its singing out? Ok so the GIG with Hiko
is to get the most amount of emotive response. From the smallest structure possible. To express it. Me... f**k it. I have verbal diarrhea, always have. There is acceptance, in your last line. Yet again, an emotion connotation. Applied to it! An addition and, your....
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Intention.
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Plenty ah stuff, to put the knife to. If you realize what it is your studying. As I don't know you. Must rely on your poem to tell what conditions your using in the context of word play and association. Well bullshit, has passed and here it is...

You, in the middle post to me. An almost impossible question. Some would pass but not I. I like a quest and what I make up, when the immediate. Subjective...
Is not obviously bashing you, on the head. To titillate, as hypothesis.
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'It isn't here.'
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Neat. thank you! 05/19/10. Ooo love the #19. The perfect quandary hey? 4:54am
HERE, an I giggle delight. An thank you, all over again. Peace ...Ro...
PS
I thought your Profile Poem, was Awesome! Yes yes, a Terrible Lie. !ndeed.
To tweeze, the geezer with those tweezers. That please. An Thank-you!
What is hiding in what I did here?