Sin to Disappear

I just thought of it and wrote it down

There once,

Was a girl named Lynn.

For she,

Had committed a deadly sin.

With no trust from others,

She stood alone.

This sin,

She would tell no one.

On a distant hill,

She stood and smiled.

Even though her sin stil haunts her.

She will soon

Be rid of this great burden.

It slowly eats and rips

At her heart.

She knows, she needs

To make this sin

Disappear and heal her soul.

Reviews

[James Johnson]

wow this is a great poem :) but when you said "Had committed and deadly sin" it doesnt make sense. Other than that, fantastic poem :)