Queen of Elements

Queen of Elements

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

The queen of

All elements.

She would rule

All people and civilization.

Earth, wind

Fire and water.

 

Fire,

She would control

Hells, fury

And rage.

 

Water,

She would control

Tides, floods

And hurricanes.

 

Earth,

She would control

All nature

And it's surroundings.

 

And Wind,

She would control

Tornadoes

And desert sandstorms.

 

She would be

The most powerful queen.

The ruler of

The world.

The end to our living.

 

I guess we could call her

Mother Earth.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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Wow!
I LOVE this :)
The infusion of the elements is great work love, the last two lines have impact, I love it!
xx

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like the play around the different elements of nature.... the end to our living? I find that particular line doubtful, paints a picture of a destructive end for us all or something, its just my thought though... nice flow

Posted 15 Years Ago


It's true. Nature created us, we should respect it. We should realize that nature controls us, not the other way around.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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