United

We all wish to

Free ourselves

From that secretly dark place

We call our minds.

Soon

We wil escape.

We will fly

As one.

United.

Reviews

if only.

[quill of shadows]

although most of ur work iv read so far isnt realy my style the comes pretty close short to the piont well done ,QoS

[Seepz]

This poem reminds me of the Soul of the world that Paulo Coelho talks about.. Short and Precise.. Good one!

[deeps]

To free ourself is letting everything go inside of us. I don't think anyone can really do that. That would expose to much of our heart and soul. This is wonderfully expressed!

[Lorame]

The second part of the poem makes the reader wonder "How?"
It's interesting, because as I read the first half, I could completely relate..it's like the words were so, so familiar. But then the second half opened up a lot of wondering and questions. How abruptly and quickly it switched over. I kind of liked this piece because of that.

[Brian]

The human mind is the worst enemy of mankind. And indeed it is a dark place, and we do need to free ourselves from our own prison. Very good poem, it makes a person think.