Oh My Goddess

I want to be a creator

A goddess built to worship.

I would locate the stars

And conquer all fears.

There would be no death

No war.

Just a free land

In which I would rule.

Reviews

[Joshua Hood]

i like the word rule in the last bar.. mite b insignificant to u.. but i feel like it shows u dont just want to b worshiped u want to have power over your world... i also really like that u said you want to be a creator and then said u wanted to b built.. i like that a lot actually.. good short little write.. short ones are my favorites

[deeps]

Short and to the point, i liked this write.

[Carolina Kel]

Short and simple and very to the point, something I myself have felt before. Nicely done.

[LynLee]

id so live in that land....this is short and to the point....LOVE IT!!!! i especially like the part about no death and no wars