Anger and Hate

I am so angry

I wanna kill.

I wanna hurt you.

Scratch you.

Burn you.

Inflict pain on you

However I damn well can.

 

I hate you so much.

You made me this way.

You made me build up this hate

And now I can throw it right back.

Yeah, that's right.

Karma's a b***h.

So this

Is what you get.

For making me

Who I am today.

 

Reviews

[UpComesDown]

>< gah. angry doesn't even begin to cover the raw passionate feeling you show through this poem. Great write...

[Wondering Mind]

A very angry write, indeed. Often times, pain turns to anger and then hate, but we shouldn't let it. Hate just eats up all the other lovely emotions a person can experience.

[Caitlynxoxo]

I think every person has felt this way, one time or another, and it sucks when it makes you feel like a b***h. But that's life, that's what happens when you let untrustworthy people into your life, making the foolish mistake that they won't hurt you when it's only natural they do. :( Great poem, very angsty but that's exactly what made it great!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Moonflower]

I have felt this way before.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

such hate in each phrase, i can also feel the pain. i really liked it.

[nakerjay]

very nicely done

[Shallowed]

This poem was very well written, I was even able to feel some of the anger that was expressed

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The anger is hella intense, but the aftertaste of the love is still present
for me. This was fiery...napalm death!