Important

It was important for me.

Also important for you.

Us, was it.

We never missed a chance.

Never passed up an opportunity.

We were too important

To mess anything up.

To never stop out of line.

We knew how important it was

And we saved it.

Us.

Reviews

[Holly O'Brien]

Aww...a humble appreciation for the love of dedication....I enjoyed this, so sweet :) good write!

[Sam]

I love this. I feel like it relates to simple life very well. Nicely done!

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I really like the simplicity of this poem, Us being a tangible thing and I suppose it is..clever and innovative write