You Are Happier

You Are Happier

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

I can't count the ways

That I miss you.

 

It wouldn't be worth it.

Simply because

You wouldn't see my reason.

 

I am someone

You should see that.

 

But of course you don't

Since you are now gone

And happier.

 

You care about no one else.

 

It's just you

And the world.

 

I have disappeared from your view.

 

And you are happier.

© 2011 I Am Svetlana


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I really like this one, it shows the pain of the heart when you miss someone, and you can't do anything about it, because the someone, has changed, has left.

It shows that it's from the heart. Nice write =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is a lovely write.
It's about knowing the thoughts, why's and therefore's of another.
So if you know them so well, you are never apart...

Posted 14 Years Ago


The heart feeling lost when the one you miss doesn't care.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is indeed moving and heart-felt. The feelings of loss and regret and melancholy shout from your words. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..