The Wonderland

The Wonderland

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Dear Alice,

There you go.

Escape the party and enter the tunnel.

Drink down the bottle

Shrink and grow.

 

Dearest of Wonderland,

Alice has arrived to you.

To hate the tea party,

And stand off and against

The Queen of Hearts.

 

She will explore Wonderland

As she yearns to play along.

She slits her wrists in trying to change it.

She doesn't get change,

But only pain.

© 2011 I Am Svetlana


Author's Note

I Am Svetlana
I was thinking of Alice and Wonderland and decided to re-write it in my eyes.

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Very creative.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very interesting approach indeed.
"Dearest of Wonderland
Alice has arrived to you."

This is really taking me over...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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firstly love the Alice in Wonderland story..this is a great interpretation...the ending is the best...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this alot, Alice in Wonderland is my favorite movie, and the way you described it is absolutly beautiful :D Good job(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Its Beautiful... Well no one can deny from the fact that everyone somewhere holds a child's heart in them... I Liked It... :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..