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I never saw you cry those tears

After those few million years.

 

For everyone bowed at your feet,

As you stood tall above defeat.

 

I wanted to see you there,

But all I saw was empty air.

Author's Note

Not knowing if I should add more or not.

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

great usage of brevity.. the point is there and the message is direct and clear.. I like the conclusion very much..

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it's intriguing..if you feel it needs more..you'll know

[Midnight_Mask]

I like it xD I think you should write more, its very interesting (Y)
Good job ^^ keep it up!