He Doesn't Want You

He Doesn't Want You

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Unbearable.

Denying.

He doens't want you.

The tears fall.

Your vision blurred.

Night falls around you.

The cold sets in.

The hair on your arm begins to stand tall

Bumps appear on your skin

You begin to shiver.

Instead, he isn't there.

He's departed.

Walked away.

He doesn't want you.

Never will he ever.

© 2011 I Am Svetlana


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Damn. Replace 'He' with 'She', and I can totally feel what you mean. Clean, evocative, and painful. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a sad poem with imagery that stands out in your mind.

Posted 14 Years Ago
Good write Svetlana.short but to the point

Posted 14 Years Ago

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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..