To Be That...

To be that angry girl

Learning to have rage on the world around her.

To be that lost soul

Wandering an empty road to nowhere.

To be that perfect image

You wish to see upon your wall.

To be that perfect body

You go to extremes to attain.

To be that imperfect one

Stuck in a world of perfection.

Reviews

[Johnny Westbrook]

She wants to be miss perfect i see ;)
I like this piece, but i think it has room to be improved. Either by making it longer and telling more about that girl, or either as a short story. Either way I like it. Nice write.