Painting

A poem for Aldith, the main character in Show Me Love

The brush between my fingers

Drenched in stark colour

Dripping with life.

Bright red

Cerulean blue

Forest green

Sunshine yellow.

Firm strokes

On the canvas

Detailing the world

In swoops of colour.

Yellowredbluepurple

Greenpinkblackorange

They dance across the landscape.

The brush between my fingers

Drenched in stark colour

Dripping with life

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

Beautiful use of simplicity. I absolutely love this piece.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Simplicity at its finest! I commend the style of this piece. Classy. :)

[Trace]

The body of the poem looks like a vase, the poem itself is full of color, beautiful painting of poetry and presentation. Trace

[EmaleighLynn]

Thanks Trace! I didn't even notice the vase-like look.

[Neon]

Nice poem. You've captured the moments of your life nicely into the frame of words.

[EmaleighLynn]

Thanks, Neon, but once again, this is not my actual life, but rather a character. Thanks again.

[Pryde Foltz]

A vibrant and lively piece.