Always in my Heart

For a special someone. Comments welcome.

I love you I miss you I need you.

 

I can’t remember how to function without you

 

I know where I went wrong

 

I know that I can’t fix it

 

I can’t stop thinking about you

 

I can’t stop seeing you

 

 

You hurt me to my core

 

But I still think you are beautiful

 

Your heart is wicked

 

Your face warms loins of many

 

 

Could I have one more chance please

 

I need to know how it would have worked out

 

I’m happy now

 

He makes me happy now

 

But my heart still belongs to you

 

 

Why do we love those who kill our spirit

 

Those who we gave all of ourselves

 

My hearts beats faster when I think of you

 

My blood turns cold

 

 

I can make up excuses

 

Call you evil and crude

 

But only I know

 

That there is a space for you

 

Always in my heart

 

Always in my home

 

Always in my bed

Author's Note

What do you think? Sound like a desperate plea to get him back?

Reviews

[Summer]

I don't think it sounds like a desperate plea, but you can really tell how much the character wants to be with them, and how much they love them.

[Sseoni]

I really liked this poem! It was very emotional and a beautiful poem. I could really feel the emotion in this poem. In my opinion, it doesn't sound like a desperate plea or anything. You really let the reader know how much you loved the person, how they make you feel, and how they'll always be in your heart. I really enjoyed reading this poem! :D

[J]

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