Bittersweet Sanity

Written on 11/29/08

Certainty of measurable sanity

Tragically disipating

Phenomonaly concealed eyes

Protecting deep weaknesses

Constantly waiting

Endlessly watching

Whimsically setting about wondering

Who will I become next

Author's Note

Written from the perspective of someone insane with multiple personality disorder. Reviews on the tone.

Reviews

[Ezekiel]

Now this, this has such excellent vision. I can see it from the insane person's perspective for sure- trying to find themselves, but disappearing because they don't know where they belong. Excellent short piece, here. Love the combinations of words you used- "whimsically setting about wondering"- love that! Great poem, here.

[Dani California]

"Contantly waiting, endlessly watching"...

you have some great lines in your work. Very deep .... and cleverly expressed. "Who will I become next"... a lot of insight there. Nice work!

[Cris Unine]

makes absolultly no sense.....

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I would prefer to see beautifully replaced with tragically but other than that, a great piece. I don't believe most people sufffering from schizophrenia and psychosis embrace their condition but are instead torn by it and are in constant turmoil akin to mental torture. Just my thoughts.