now we walk

it seems those walls keep tumbling down

Now we walk.

                   Out into the dark night.

Moon hidden
by the growth of trees.

                   I feel you there.

Your power.

Your eyes gleaming bright.

         I feel you breathing.

 

Closer.

                    Closer.

Every moment I feel you closer.

Knowing

 

          I will be a feast

                     for your hungry hands

ravaged by you
                    

                     moved by the night

           trembling

with the want of such a thing

your heat
           surrounds me

in ways I never felt

                           before

I melt and am reborn

on my knees

Author's Note

it wanted to stretch and reach

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is different for you, which I quite liked. I felt the longing and the tentative craving that began as a ripple and ended as a wave. I can relate to this...just the pure expanse of abandon that at times seems so absolutely attractive.

Technically: I'm wondering at the many different single lines. I felt a little as though I was jumping from line to line instead of flowing. Just my personal opinion, though.

Overall, a sensual, beautiful piece.

[Emily B]

thanks, at one time it was all left justified, still trying to decide what it wants to be when it grows up

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, I like the right and left formatting, just the separate lines made it a little choppy. Was thinking more of a "short stanzas" feel...I don't know. Then again, I'm not some stylistic genius, so allow it to grow on its own, you will make the right choices!

[cest la vie]

One of the top sensuous pieces I have read here..
Beautiful, Emily!!

[Jibey]

I soon found myself walking with you... sensing your senses, the anticipation of your heart, the pulsing of your blood, the hope and desire... like a lioness crouching on the dry grass as the lion approaches, ready to mount...

[Erotic Goddess]

Knowing I will be
a feast
for your hungry hands
ravaged by you

This was beautiful and stunning. It was a great walk through the desire that could be felt. :)

xxoxx

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Alll-righty then! Excuse me, while I get myself a very very cold drink ...

This is a section of your wilderness that I didn't know about. One of those places that makes one tremble ... while he keeps walking forward. What did I think? That you didn't have this place in the forest of your soul? I guess it just never occurred to me.

Now excuse my, while I go stand in front of the open refrigerator for an hour or so.

[Collect-Eye]

Umm..I'm gonna refrain from saying how this made me feel..but I'm a man
And I will say this--
I think I'm supposed to feel how i feel after reading this..
which means that it was executed effectively.
I just like how the piece pulls you along and inside it's mind..slowly, sensually, vulnerably, suggestively..it's the living word, I say...

[R J Askew]

This NOT Robert Frost's wood you are walking in methinks! Rustle of leaves in unwritten next verse!

[kurrupted]

KURRUPTED- (AWESTRUCK AND SPEECHLESS, FOR A WHILE HE PONDERED FOR THE WORDS,WANDERING HIS MIND, GAZING INTO THE INFINITE GALAXY.....BUT THEN ALL HE COULD MANAGE TO SAY WAS ) "WOW!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

I melt and am reborn
on my knees

[Lady Lazarus.]

your heat
surrounds me
in ways I never felt
before
I melt and am reborn


absolutely beautiful imagery.
your way with words instils awe and inspiration.....
I love this
written with such amaizng

[J. Hampton]

My...My ...Emily ????

211 1/2 degrees ..... !!!
Yet you manage ...to not go over the line....yet we see the liquidity ...rise to steam.

"ravaged by you
moved by the night
trembling
with the want of such a thing "

~ love that..... sometimes it's like that...not every moment is for composure ... ::: smile::

Blesssssssssss