he plants seeds in pots

room for growth

the smiling creator

takes his light in his hands

and whispering something

of lovely summer

places tiny seeds in pots

and hovers close

anticipating the joys

of imperceptible growth.

 

 

Reviews

[raining]

whispering earth, sod, voices I can hear outside a window, this poem gives much to the reader. "whispering something of lovely summer" is good. The idea of a creator leaning over his creation is close to the heart, like a prayer might be of the imaginings of a smiling creator. thanks raining (back)

[Ladysue]

Stunningly beautiful. Yes, it is just like that too. Nicely done!

[Tracie Skarbo]

Oh Emily... you make me yearn for spring with this one! Although I looked in the garden today and saw some new sprouts...:) It can't be that far off! Great job!

[Gastroc.]

another beautiful poem!

[Collect-Eye]

takes a bit of courage to create/grow, but it's rewarding. It takes a subtle balance of action and non-action...a voice and the proper acoustics..and the faith to not worry who is or isn't listening. That's how this piece struck me.

[fhamie]

wow! a short yet growing poem....add some more..it's really nice...:D