lunar pull

you have a knack for knowing

when my gravity

has attracted attention

from the ebb and tide

of an admiring flow

 

in a day or two

the waves will have

wandered off

and I'll still be walking

with you

 

 

Reviews

[Tommy]

Beats in rhythm to the tide, and your eyes are what pulls him in…Its not when you are walking hand in hand, but those moments when you take time to stand still, that the heart hears that rhythmic pull...Drawn…

Great Write Emily!
RLG,
Tommy

[Ladysue]

amazing work...

[Jeff Loquist]

it is amazing how gravity works...it always seems to keep me coming back

[Crowley]

ahhhhhhhhh.....yes. We are still people, people that attract that kind of gravity. But there is moon gravity and sun gravity...the "you" is most likely the sun. Great writing

[Ed Hart]

ah, sweet lunacy, is presage to that long 'still' walking

[Robin]

these are the kind of words that flow through one ..