morning after

Who are you listening to?

 

well,

 

     the moon whispered

 

the lightning walked

 

     the thunder rumbled

 

the rain chattered

 

     the morning air sighed around me

 

but I was waiting for you.

 

 

Reviews

[...]

. a magical longing ... a beautiful image ...
. and an absolutely lovely poetic voice ...

[Linear]

"You are indeed an enigma" said the puzzle to the Queen :0)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Emily, this is beautiful- love it

Chloe

[lostboy]

we all here different things from the same source sometimes.everyone is waiting for something and changing into something.

[Sel Whiteley]

Brilliant, I adore this. You have such a musical ear for how nature works, whether the birdsong in so many of your other poems or meteology. I love the dawn and to find a poem able to distill that is a true luxury, thanks for sharing.

[Siddhartha]

Everything conspired...

[Jeff Loquist]

i knew the moon would find you again