Untitled

Tears hide behind those pretty eyes,

Sobs behind that pretty smile.

A broken heart is hidden in that pretty chest.

Visible to only those who care to look.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

there are none so blind eh..................If we are not careful we could all slip into the same category.....people..NEED...people

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful on the surface can hide the scars...

the complexion of pain.

[zainul]

Great imagery.
Wonderful philosophical and romantic expression.

[Emily B]

strong and honest, the hallmark of really good poetry

[fireblossom]

A good poem. Direct with a real message.

[Patrick Henry]

Great poem!! Love the pic of the beautiful girl as well. : ) In the background I notice instruments that remind me of my days in Drum Corps...... very cool!! Interesting to have a deep and pretty poem, named "Untitled". ; ) xoxo -Mark

[The Nude Writer]

A good reminder that we all need to take a look more often.
Love this poem. So much said in such a short amount of space

[soliloquy]

You say much here in few words. Nice job of attracting and keeping my attention.

[Emrick]

Short poems are always nice.
(I like the style of writing here,
Good work.