What i am

Sometimes i think too much

Sometimes i am the hero

And sometimes i am the villain

But most of the time 

I am both

I will be the hero to others

To the people that i love  

To everyone that needs me

But in the process of saving everyone else

I will lose myself

And sometimes i ask myself

Who will save me? 

Reviews

[L.E.Osborne]

I love this! I can relate to having this feeling. It gives us as the reader so much to think about! Great stuff :)

[Duckey]

Aww thanks so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Shogun]

Hello Duckey,

I agree with Stonz P. about the error. The words are nice, and the poem constructed beautifully. Keep up the awesome work!

Shogun

[Duckey]

I didn't even realize at the time, sorry :) Thank you so much! Means a lot :)

[Stonz P.]

It will be "lose" not "loose"

Rest is good; you write well.

[Duckey]

Oh thank you for pointing that out, i didn't even realize! Thanks very much, means a lot!